By Claire Booth
Felicity
Huffman was sentenced Friday for her role in the college admissions scandal. She
paid $15,000 for a test cheater to bump up her daughter’s SAT scores. The actor
got 14 days in the slammer. And this is where—from my persnickety copy-editing
point of view—things got interesting. And infuriating.
Jail and prison are not the same
thing. They cannot
be used interchangeably. Yet they were, repeatedly, during the coverage and
social media conversations about Huffman’s case. I also see the mistake in
crime fiction every once in a while. It makes me cringe there, too.
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| Time magazine's coverage. They didn't mention that the federal Bureau of Prisons will be the one assigning her to a facility. |
Admittedly,
this case presented some challenges that aren’t usually there when you need to
differentiate between jail and prison. I’ll get to those in a minute.
Typically,
any criminal sentence less than a year is served in a jail. Jails are operated
by local authorities, usually counties. They are designed to hold people who
are awaiting trial or serving time for misdemeanor convictions. Prisons are
operated by either a state or the federal government (there are also some
privately run prisons—the same terminology holds true for them, too). They are
for people who’ve been convicted of felonies. Now, occasionally a person in
prison might get out after serving less than a year (good behavior on an
already low-year sentence or other reasons) but generally, this is how it
works.
This
information is pure gold for the crime fiction writer who needs a setting in the lockup. The two places have very
different environments and you can create very different characters to populate
them. Many times, though, writers just need a toss-off reference and that's where the errors creep in. Your main character's uncle isn't at the birthday party because he's incarcerated for a first-time drunk driving offense? Uncle Billy isn't in prison. He's in jail.
Now let’s
get to Felicity. This was fascinating to me, because it did not hold to the
usual rules. She was sentenced to 14 days in "a facility designated by the
Bureau of Prisons." The federal Bureau of Prisons doesn’t run jails, so it’s a
reasonable bet that news organizations took when they said that she will serve
prison time—even though she’ll only be there two weeks.
Here's the Associated Press, which appears to have done the same thing I did. It reflexively said 14 days in jail (bottom tweet), then corrected itself later after looking at the judge's Bureau of Prisons statement.
Breaking news is tough. Journalism is hard. The AP did it right here, and consistently stayed with prison for the rest of its coverage. Not like some places. This
right here is the absolute cardinal sin: A headline that doesn’t match the
story.
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| The enlarged lead paragraph of the story on a TV station website. |
If all this is still confusing, then use a tried-and-true route. Pick a word that could mean either, like I did up above. It's not a solution in the journalism world--no editor would ever let you use them--but in fiction, they might accomplish what you need.
Slammer.
Clink.
Lockup.
Hell, use the word pokey. It might be corny, but at least it isn't wrong.
